May (wrens) wrote in pencileaters,
May
wrens
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Avadiana

[yay my first post here! xD]

Nobody's crit anything of mine for ages >< and well...thass not exactly making me improve, so yes. Here:




[sketched on ms paint for those who wanted to know]


Yes!11111 I want your crits, xD because I'm not going to be better any other way, really.
Anyway, YES i am going to fix up the very obvious wrong things there [liek her ear stalks and her jewllry to maybe be a bit thicker] but other than that, you should go ahead and give me some constructive critism. ohh, and don't worry about her pose, she's going to be sitting on something squishy and all...if you get what I mean. <3
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